Saturday, May 21, 2011

Ek Chota sa Paigaam…!

 

Raah dekh rakhi hai us din ki kabse…

Aage ke sapne sajaa rakhe hain na jaane kabse

Bade utaavle hain yahan se jaane ko

Zindagi ka aglaa padaav paane ko…

 

Par na jaane kyu dil me aaj kuch aur aata hai

Waqt ko rokne ka jee chahta hai

Jin baaton ko lekar rote hain

Aaj un par hasi aati hai

Na jaane kyu aaj…unn palon ki yaad…bohot sataati hai…

 

Kaha karta hu badi mushkil se chaar saal seh jaunga

Par na jaane aaj kyu lagta hai ki kuch peeche reh jayega

Kahi-ankahi, hazaaron baatein reh jayengi

Naa bhulne wali kuch yaadein reh jayengi

Meri taang tab kaun kheecha karega?

Sirf mera sar khane ko, tab kaun mera peecha karega..?

 

Jahan do hazaar ka hisaab nahi hoga,

Wahan do-do rupaye ke liye kaun ladega?

Kaun raat bhar jaag kar saath padhega?

Kaun mera lunch mujhse pooche bina khayega?

Kaun mere naye naye naam banayega…?

 

Mai ab bina matlab ke kisse ladunga?

Bina topic ke kisse faltu me bakwaas karunga?

Kaun phone pe, room par, dilasa dilayega?

Kaun galati se number aane par…galiyaan sunayega?

Cafeteria me Slice…kiske saath piyunga?

Wo haseen pal…kiske saath jiyunga…?

 

Aise dost kahan milenge?

Jo khayi me bhi dhakka de ayein

Aur phir tumhe bachane…khud bhi kood jayein

Meri kahaniyon se pareshan kaun hoga?

Kabhi mujhe har ek ladki se baat karte dekh, hairan kaun hoga..?

 

Kaun kahega, “Manna tere joke pe hassi nahi aati?”

Kiske saath boring lecture jhelunga?

Professor ke PJ pe raakshas ki tarah kaun hasega?

Har chote shart pe haarne wale ki treat…

Iss chakkar me ab kaun fasega?

Mere ‘Dramatics’ ko radhhi kehne ki…himmat kaun karega?

Bina dare sachhi raay dene ki…himmat kaun karega…?

 

Stage par ab kiske saath jaunga?

Juniors ko faltu ke lecture kaise sunaunga?

Achanak,  bina matlab ke, kisiko bhi dekh kar, pagalon ki tarah hasna

Na jaane yeh…phir kab hoga?

Keh do doston…dubara sab hoga…?

 

Doston ke liye Professors se kab lad payenge?

Kya ye din phir se aa payenge?

Raat ko 3 baje Maggi khane kaun jayega?

Uncle Sam’s pe pel ke khane ki shart kaun lagaega?

Kaun mujhe meri kabiliyat par bharosa dilayega?

Aur zyada uddne par, zameen pe layega…?

 

Meri khushi me sach me khush kaun hoga?

Mere gham me mujhse zyada dukhi kaun hoga?

Meri ye kavita kaun padhega?

Kaun isse sach me samjhega?

Bohot kuch likhna…abhi baaki hai

Kuch saath…shayad abhi baki hai…

 

Bas ek baat se darr lagta hai doston…

Hum ajnabee na ban jaye doston

Zindagi ke rangon me, dosti ka rang pheeka na pad jaye

Kahin aisa na ho, doosre rishton ki bheed me, dosti dum tod jaye

Zindagi me milne ki fariyaad karte rehna

Agar na mil sake, to kam se kam yaad…karte rehna…

 

Chahe jitna hass lo aaj mujh par

Mai bura nahi maanunga

Iss hasi ko apne dil me basaa lunga

Aur jab yaad aayegi tumhari

Yehi hasi lekar, thoda muskura lunga…

 

Abhimanyu hai mera naam

Aur ye tha mere doston ke liye

Ek chota sa paigaam…!

 

35 comments:

  1. Hey abhimanyu Very well written from your side. Superlike... :)

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  2. First of all let me congratulate you for such an awwwsssooomeeee poem...

    And ya, aap fiqr matt karo, aapka peechha mein saari umr nai chhodunga..

    OMG I cant stop reading it over n over agn..
    Loved it..

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  3. One Word...

    AWESOME....

    Hats off man..

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  4. @ Ayush Goel Thank You So much
    @Deepak...(drama style)...'sob'..'sob'..."its beautiful!"
    @ Ankit Thnx buddy!!!

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  5. Simply Awesome!!!!!!
    I didnt knw tis...ABY - The poet.
    U make the reader senti....
    Dont write so much from Heart....
    Nd about DOSTI....
    These bonds wont break so easily....High bond energy...lolz...

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  6. Thnx Falak...U r one f those few whose friendship I'll cherish fr a 'long' time to come!!!

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  7. well I dint knw tht U are such a good poet:).
    really njoyed this wrk of urs.
    senti kar dia tumne sabko ..sniff sniff.:)

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  8. Haha...Even I dint know this was a poem...Its just a bunch of emotions...Or maybe thats wat poems are!...I wonder!
    Thnx Anyways Ronnie!!!

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  9. hey bhaiya,
    really an AWESOME poem...
    mai full senti ho gaya but haan jahan tak DOSTI ki baat we treat u as a bro toh aap yeh mat soocho ki hum aapka peecha itni jaldi chood denge , dosti ki hai aapse maut ke baad bhi saath nahi choodenge......
    in the end a song for u :
    "yeh dosti hum nahi todenge ....todenge hm magar tersa saath naa todenge"

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  10. ............ m blank Aby.........
    u knw na.... i used 2.... whenevr sumthng senti....hapns or whn i read......dn u knw wts my reactn...... :"(.....






    bt wud LOVE 2 say........
    sacchi..... mor dn Awesome.......



    u'r sucha grttt poet.....dumbo........
    hatss off 2 dis poem....n 2 u 2.... :'(.........


    well d main n d most beautiful.....thing ever happened..... is OUR FRIENDSHIP.......... n CARE for EACH OTHER.......

    u r my best't frnd.....i evr got............
    rahi baat chodkne ki..... to main to kabhi nai chodungi.... tujhe ..
    tera pata nai..... ;)......:-D



    I'l always BE WITH U....AS UR SHAdow....
    & ya.....
    I ALSO need U my guddy motu frnd.... For WHOLE of MY LIFE....


    muaahhhh.....




    - With LOVE & CARE

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  11. our frndshp bond is vryyyy......... strong...... ;)......... so NEVER wry.......

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  12. no words... speechless...
    AWSUM POEM !!!
    truly speaking..it took me in the 4th year (like a tym machine)....
    i was just full of all kinda emotions and at last they all merged and i was sad thinkng of d future wen i wud b leaving dis clg.....
    really..u did a splendid job... and i m goin to copy this poem... m sorry..
    unabl to stop meself readng it again n again....
    really..a heart touchin poem...it shows the imotions, the hard work, the dedication, the love for clg life n many others of d one who has written this...well dnt worry.. we cant easily forget u.... u r simply nt dat kinda pesonality....

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  13. @ Shruti..thnx a ton..it matters a lot..coz while I was thinking about U guys..it struck wd a start..I hv just one year left...N dis came out...So thnx again!!

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  15. @ Akshay...Motu saale nautanki na kar ab...hehehe...n ya d song U r talking about...it is..."Yeh dosti hum nahin todenge...Todenge dam magar tera saath na chhodenge"

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  16. @Tabbu...teri to...comment me bhi taane maregi? rukk tu mil?...bhartaa bana dunga tera...huh'...hehe..d feeling is mutual yaar...

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  17. @Himanshu...thnx bhai...appreciate it!!!
    @Karan, Dhaval: thnx yaar ;)

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  18. ya.....bahut kuch similar hai.....
    mene kaha kheechi.....??

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  19. u di'nt noticd....sumthng new is der.... in dt main cmnt...

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  20. Superb Awesome... One.. No one can be left senti. after reading this. kabhi toh sochta hu ki 4yr b.tech ko aaram se complete karu...aur aap se Out of contact ki baat hai toh yeh ho nahi sakta.. "Mein aap ko bhul jaun yeh hone nahi sakta aur aap mujhe bhul jaye yeh ho nahi sakta"... Itni jaldi peecha nahi chodunga... Besharm hona aap se hi sikha hai.. ;)

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  21. amazingly awesome poem !! u r a supr dupr poet !! nd i m speechlesss ! wow !! itz soo sweet!! pdpu is gona miss u.. nd pdpu shall always be proud of u !! way to gooo... abhimanyu manna!!! :)

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  22. Awsomest way to write ur feelings Aby... n u say u dnt understand poems !!!
    Paigaam mil gya tera dost... Glad to see myself indirectly in some of memories.. yaad aata hai past but we are still togather so let's make better memories in future than bitter past
    N since nw u knw poems... comment on my blog :P

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  23. @ Yesha...Thnk U so much Sweetheart...But U know...Ur poes are way better...I have saved each one of em'...maybe some day I'll upload them here..

    @Vibhuti:...hahaha...very smart!...But ya...thnx a lot!!!

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  24. Manna! Every line, every word just got me into a flashback. Loyola, Changa and PDPU jus ran in front of me. Dunno how many times did I go through your poem jus to relive those days! Thanx wont be jus enough. The comments above will surely make you realize why do I consider you as one of my inspirations for my BLOG alongside Yesha and Ashiwini!! :) Others will b missin u soon but I am already missin you to a greater extent which cannot b expressed in words. Time may fly by dude, situations might change, Abhijan will alwayz be there for you whenever U need me! The PAIGAAM was loud and clear! :))

    Keep up the good work bhai. Waitin to see u fly even higher and keep inspiring me and others like U have alwayz!! Love u alwayz! <3 <3

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  25. lyk..super lyk..super most lyk..:) :) :)


    n n n ..so sorry for late..:( ;)

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  26. @Abhijan: sob! sob!...its beautiful...No..seriously!...U have no clue how much we ol miss U here...

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